Should I leave the Cafe?

Should I go, should I stay

I’ll be sad either way

You guys yell, you guys scream

You make it hard for this child to dream

You sit here and poke fun

You know what, f**k it, I’m done

I can’t do this no more

I’m so pissed

I can’t f*****g take it

That’s it, I’m leaving, I’m walking out that door

You guys left me, now it’s my turn to leave you

Because guess what, I’m through

Author's Note

I don't know..tell me your opinion..

Reviews

[Rick Puetter]

Hi Mimi,

Poetically this work is fine. It has good meter and rhyme. However I hate the message. The message is giving up, and I always hate that message. To me giving up is a sort of self-betrayal. It says that you can't take it, that you're not good enough. Now there are lots of things in life that are discouraging and make you want to give up. But don't give in. If things aren't working, you can approach things in a different way. Then perhaps you can be more successful in whatever it was you wanted to achieve. My motto is always "Try harder, and when that doesn't work, try harder still, and repeat as often as necessary!"

Best regards,

Rick