All I want..

I want to reform myself
The way i'd been for years
With fusion of several emotions,
That includes smiles and silent tears...


Now, i want her eyes to reflect my memories
Want her tears to tell our poignant stories...
Want her forehead to kiss,
And make her aware to sense my untold wish....

The moment when we meet
I want tranquil everywhere
Not even the songs of bird to hear,
Only the wind at its sweetest flow...
And the sun without its scorching glow...

I want to feel her breath in air...
Coz i want to unfold
My buried secrets to her
I want her gaze to hypnotize me once again,
My life has become a lava bed...
Come and soothe it be that
Rain........

Author's Note

Just words and love:)

Reviews

[Donna]

That was nice Govind! Nicely written!

[Govind singh]

Thnk u so mch mam..

[peter Duggan]

Wonderful words Govind. I found my beautiful wife fifty six years ago. She taught me how to be peaceful and loving, and after all these years I still adore her. I love your poem, my friend....peter

[Govind singh]

Loved Ur words sir. Thnk u for Ur precious tym and beautiful words..

[Anise]

Lovely and romantic. Very delicate and tender thoughts here. Well done.

[Govind singh]

Thnk u dear anise..I'm glad you enjoyed:)

[Anise]

you are welcome, it was my pleasure

[Shayan]

I like how introspective this poem is. The last three lines are my favorite.. sometimes just the thought of a person can be the rain that keeps your world from going up in flames. You expressed yourself well.

[Govind singh]

Thnk u shayan,my dear frnd..im glad u enjoyed:)

[John Ciarmello]

So wonderfully enjoyable Govind! This piece was graceful, meaningful and relatable. "Come and soothe it be that rain." Beautiful ending to a beautifully written piece of poetry. Well done!

[Govind singh]

Thnk u soch sir...I write what I feel..Ur reviews always encourages me:))

[Neville]

It must surely be the real thing......A delightful love tribute & song all rolled into one.......Neville

[Govind singh]

Thnk u so mch sir...I do appreciate Ur comments..means a lot.

[Neville]

My pleasure............

[Fatima]

Wow there's a great use of imagery and powerful words to describe and explain your feelings with great consistency. Also greatly structured and a good use of rhyming words to emphasize your message and emotions.

[Govind singh]

Thnk u Fatima...people say I do have a strong imagery..may be god's gift;)..thnks again.

[Ghost]

Such a nice way to love a woman... Thanks for sharing these nice words with everyone.

[Govind singh]

Thnk u sir..I appreciate Ur kind review and Ur precious tym...means a lot

[Pepper]

wow... that was beautiful.

[Govind singh]

Thnks for Ur kindly reviews..

[Einstein Noodle]

i like the personifications of nature throughout ..it reflects that sincere desire to love and be loved .. lovely is the word that comes to mind :)
E.

[Govind singh]

Thnk u sir for Ur great supportive words.i appreciate Ur comment.