All I want..

I want to reform myself
The way i'd been for years
With fusion of several emotions,
That includes smiles and silent tears...


Now, i want her eyes to reflect my memories
Want her tears to tell our poignant stories...
Want her forehead to kiss,
And make her aware to sense my untold wish....

The moment when we meet
I want tranquil everywhere
Not even the songs of bird to hear,
Only the wind at its sweetest flow...
And the sun without its scorching glow...

I want to feel her breath in air...
Coz i want to unfold
My buried secrets to her
I want her gaze to hypnotize me once again,
My life has become a lava bed...
Come and soothe it be that
Rain........

Author's Note

Just words and love:)

Reviews

[KCthelastboyscout]

Lovely words coming together to paint a beautiful picture.you have a romantic heart and that never goes out of style

[Govind singh]

Thnk u so mch my frnd...u hve a kind heart and that never goes out of style:)

[Lydia Shutter]

Such a romantic write. Lovely. Lydi**

[Govind singh]

Thnk u Lydi...I appreciate Ur kind words and precious tym...means a lot

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Beautiful, lyrical love poem. So passionate and real. Eloquent words and lovely imagery-“Come and soothe it be that..Rain.....” Enchanting!

[Govind singh]

Thnk u pretty higley for Ur kind words....I hope u enjoyed..

[Ardra]

Nice poem.. Mmm I like the bit of you being the lava and asking her to be the soothing rain :)

[Govind singh]

Thnks galadriel for Ur precious tym and beautiful words...I appreciate Ur comments....means a lot

[Amy]

I love your poem a lot. It has so much love being shown throughout, that it's overflowing with love! Keep up the good work.

[Govind singh]

Thnk u Amy...Ur words encourages me...

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful and wonderful emotions shared.
"I want to feel her breath in air...
Coz i want to unfold
My buried secrets to her
I want her gaze to hypnotize me once again"
The above lines. Perfect. Thank you Govind for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Govind singh]

Thnk u for Ur great review my dear frnd...means a lot:)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Govind.

[DIVYA]

I love poems with good rhyming and so this sounded great. Read aloud, it felt so romantic. Unfortunately, the winds of love have a rhythm and timing of their own. Yet, the innocence of your wishes touches me. Great work, Govind.

[Govind singh]

Thnk u Divya for Ur kind words and precious tym..means a lot:)

[DIVYA]

It is such a pleasure to read you, Govind. Keep writing!