A short horror story.

I hosted a contest "Shortest horror" story a few weeks ago so I decided to give it a shot myself. It's more of a suspense but hopefully some creepiness.

I slowly walked to the edge of the cliff, away from the bedlam of the small village. I'm trapped here.  As I turned around I came face to face with a peculiar little girl, her face as fine as the creation made by a master of very fine art. SO handsome was she, I was to become captivated by her innocent yet seductive black eyes. I plummeted to the depths of the sea. 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think and what I can do better !