Winter Vignette

Snow falling softy

Mingles with my frozen  tears

On your crypt below

Author's Note

Posted for contest.

Reviews

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations on winning the Haiku Contest! A great haiku!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on this sad and great Haiku!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on your great winning poem

[Shannon Carinne Sparks]

This is very moving for so few words.

[Periac]

short and sweet.....a great write...thanks for entering!!

[Lynne P. Alexander Holl..]

this is beautiful

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Great Haiku! Congrats on your win!

[Alaska Frost]

Beautiful and sad at the same time. I love reading haikus...they're short but express so much emotion if done well. Great haiku... Thanks for entering my contest! Good luck!
-Alaska

[Robert Francis Callaci]

I don't see how you can't win- a beautiful, sad frozen snapshot of a love lost


my warmest
bob

[Viper9]

Terribly sad, but beautifully written. Made me think of the Ron Franz character in "Into the Wild" -- I imagine he feels this way every day.

(If you haven't seen "Into the Wild", you should.)