Goodbye

Goodbye

A Poem by Grayfox
"

Lonely

"

Broken glass
I step on
Same Glass
I cut with
the pool of blood
leaves footprints
the light fades
Im falling
On the floor
Im crying
Eyes closing
Im fading
No time
to say goodbye

All I needed
was to be part
of something
of someone
to love
to have
but nothing
I'll be


So it goes
Ill die alone
cold and bare
nothing inside
no remorse
eyes are dry
burning and sore
silent I scream
no voice to speak
arms at my side
on my back I lie
a letter to mom
on the desk
my last thoughts
written in words
all you know
is goodbye...

All I needed
was to be part
of something
of someone
to love to have
but nothing
I'll be

goodbye...

© 2009 Grayfox


Author's Note

Grayfox
any feed back is greatly appreciated. thank you.

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Beautifully powerful, dark but definitely powerful. Very expressive and saddening.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Great write!

'All I needed
was to be part
of something
of someone
to love
to have
but nothing
I'll be'

I loved that line!


Posted 16 Years Ago



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Grayfox
Grayfox

Peoria, AZ



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Im 25 year old male, living in arizona for the time being. Born n raised in seattle washington and lived there until last year. I love to write, and would love some great feedback on my stuff. more..

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