Engulfed In Flames

Written 4/24/15 Written with a bit of help from moonskittles and sereenaoutloud. Btw MS suggested I post both. :P

Option A - With sereenaoutloud's help.

Flaming heart

Devour me whole

From the inside out

Incinerate

The scar tissue

Left behind

By the last

Volcanic heart

That scorched

My insides

Engulf me

In the flames

That surround you

Eagerly I wait

To be consumed

By you

And brought to ashes

[End]

Option B - With moonskittles' help.

Heart on fire
Devour me whole
From the inside
Out.
Torch away
The scar tissue
Left behind
By the last
Flaring fervor
That scorched
My insides.
Engulf me
In the flames
That surround you.
Eagerly I wait
To be thoroughly
consumed.

[End]

Author's Note

Couldn't decide which one I liked better, so went with the suggestion and posted both. :P
Thanks MS and Sereena! Your help is much appreciated!

[Write was inspired by the these two pictures, just an fyi]

Reviews

[sereenaoutloud]

Greeneyes your write is so strong and beautiful.. you already know i am a fan of yours girlie! This is the first time reading moonskittles option and i have to say i love "Flaring fervor" (do not tell her though lol)
Also love the picture it fits what you wrote perfectly !!

[~]

ahem..don't tell -- says the volcanic lava woman! :D love both of you girlies!!

[sereenaoutloud]

of course you would be nosy and read my review lol awww we feel the love sassy!!

[GreenEyedPoet]

Thanks hun! Haha yes I know you do lol.
Ok, I promise I won't tell her - my lips are sealed! haha. However if she sees it on here, that is all your doing! :P

I actually wrote this because I randomly got the line 'engulfed in flames' one day, and so I got bored the other night and was messing around on Pinterest and saw the picture of the woman, started writing and then got stuck lol. That's when I saw the heart picture, and it ended up turning into a love poem of sorts lol.

[GreenEyedPoet]

Of course she would see that, after I said I wouldn't tell! hahaha.
We love you too MS! :D

[~]

Nosy and noisy is my split specialty :D

[sereenaoutloud]

It is great, you always have a darkness to your writes that i love!
Oh pinterest once i start on there i am gone for hours lol

[GreenEyedPoet]

Wouldn't have it any other way MS lol.

Darkness is my thing girl! Always gotta have a little bit of the dark side in my writes, or else how would you know they're mine? hahaha.

[sereenaoutloud]

hey you forgot your other specialty "sassy"
Lol Greeneyes...it is not easy to make something that is dark be beautiful.,it is a talent my friend!!

[GreenEyedPoet]

Can't forget sassy MS! :P

It has taken a long time to make the dark a thing of beauty. I have always written dark poems, but my old stuff was far from the beautiful kind of darkness lol.

[~]

no worries ladies, if it gets too dark, you can always count on me lol

[GreenEyedPoet]

That is very true! :]

[sereenaoutloud]

lol..bright rainbow of all happy colors is our skittles!!

[~]

mmmmmmmmm taste the rainbow~ LOL okay, i am done :D no more silly dally

[GreenEyedPoet]

You guys are to much lol.

[~]

they look very nice next to each other, like two of us next to you fiery one!! It was fun, and they are all your words! A plea, a desire to be consumed in love's flames.
xx

[GreenEyedPoet]

I guess it's a good thing I couldn't decide which one I liked better huh? lol. Now they both can be displayed! :D

[sereenaoutloud]

I agree with MS they are all your words girlie, your inspiration!

[GreenEyedPoet]

Totally not taking all the credit here! lol. I gave it a good start, but you guys made it even better! :]

[Jamestown]

Fantastic both I honestly can't pick which I enjoyed more, BRAVO!
wording, flow, format, picture, all so well done, thanks for sharing
and b-blessed!

[GreenEyedPoet]

That's exactly how I felt when I saw them! lol.
Thanks for stopping and checking them out James!
Glad you enjoyed them! :D

[Jamestown]

UR welcome:)