Fractured

Fractured

A Poem by GreenEyedPoet
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Written 5/25/15 Chisel Away

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Negative thoughts
Chisel their way into
My skull barrier
Sculpting
The marble that is my mind.
[End]

© 2015 GreenEyedPoet


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How about 'Mutable' - liable to change ?
No-ones thinking is set in stone but we can choose how deep such thoughts impinge by self-analysis and confronting such negativity with positivity.
I love the image of a marble-brain - I want one ! as a paper-weight

Posted 8 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

8 Years Ago

I changed it to what suggested, which was Fractured. :]

You are right, no ones though.. read more
I love the descriptions in this poem. Sometimes these negative thoughts we have do more than affect how we feel... they reshape the way we live and think. Awesome write I enjoyed it very much :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

8 Years Ago

So true, negative thoughts that really do a lot to a person.
Thanks for checking it out Aaro.. read more
fractured...title suggestion

Posted 8 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

8 Years Ago

Ohhhh I like that!
sereenaoutloud

8 Years Ago

lol glad you liked it...i just had this image when i read your write of a feature skull with all th.. read more
GreenEyedPoet

8 Years Ago

Come over to the dark side, we'll gladly welcome you hehehe.
I like that image, I can totall.. read more
how those negative thoughts can worm their way in and make themselves at home. Such brilliant imagery in this well penned write.
As always greeneyes you make dark beautiful!
love this girlie!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

8 Years Ago

Dark is what I do girlie, that'll never change! lol.
Glad you liked it. :]

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Added on May 25, 2015
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