One Drop

One Drop

A Poem by Gurglesnarch van Caasi
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Our God is a God of healing, and of grace. This was written for a friend who needed to be reminded of His love for her.

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One drop of liquid 
One bloody trickle 
One self infliction 
Razors and sickles

A shield maiden cries
And closes her eyes 
Now she is the enemy
The one to despise 

One drop of liquid 
One tear to fall
The shield maiden stands
And her back's to the wall

Broken and beaten
Life is so cruel 
The questions she ponders -
Are we all more than fuel? 

One drop of liquid 
One pool of grace
But the maiden just weeps -
And in shame hides her face

"I am not worthy" 
She says with full meaning 
Her walls keep her safe
But can't answer her keening 

One drop of liquid 
One muddy hole
One maiden kneels 
In dirt and in coals

I see the maiden 
She's part of my Plan
She's Loved most of all
Though she only feels damned 

One drop of liquid
One blood bath of grace
One holy sacrifice
Washes shame from her face

For I am the Maiden 
And I am her pain
And I am her sunshine
And I am her rain

I am her Lover
I am her Sky
I am her King
I am the Most High 

One drop can save her
One drop of my blood 
One drop of Me 
Cleanses the Mud 

The maiden is crying
She doesn't now know
How much I love her
She only feels woes 

One day she'll see
One day her eyes
Will behold my forgiveness 
See My love applied 

The maiden must never
Give up or give in 
For she is now cleansed
Unaccountable for sins 

I don't love the maiden for how 
She lives, succeeds, or prays 
I don't love a future maiden
I love her completely today

One drop of liquid 
Or two, My eyes water 
Overwhelmed by the love
That I have for My daughter

© 2013 Gurglesnarch van Caasi


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"I am her Lover
I am her Sky
I am her King
I am the Most High"
I like the lines above a lot. It was a epic journey into struggle to find peace and love again. I like the tone of the poem. Leading the young woman to the positive ending. I like the positive ending for the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


Gurglesnarch van Caasi

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much! I am humbled by your kind words
For I am the Maiden

And I am her pain

And I am her sunshine

And I am her rain




I am her Lover

I am her Sky

I am her King

I am the Most High

Posted 10 Years Ago


A nice spiritual poem...Bravo...........................

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gurglesnarch van Caasi

10 Years Ago

Thank you!
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

My pleasure...:)........................

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Greetings. I am eighteen. I am a renaissance man: An artist and A bodyguard and A philosopher and A secret agent (I made that one up) But most importantly I am A writer. .. more..

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