Too Big Too Late

Thy Hand

     had caused

tremendous wrack

for self-restraint

     you lack.

How much

     you water trees

or try to plant 

     

     the flowers back

     will never change

this world

     that you have painted

ever black.

      

Reviews

[springtao]

hey thats a fun read well done !

[guy drori]

Thank you :)

[Rita L. Sev]

The effects of humanity on the Earth - so much possibility, yet we abuse the power... I like the form of this piece, as well as the message.

[guy drori]

Thank you ! You actually gave me something to think about. I hadn't thought of it as the destructive force of humanity before. Glad for your comment :)

[ANTO]

"Boom' - this is class Guy. Great formatting - image and such truth.
Well done my friend.

[guy drori]

Thank for the comment ANTO :)