~I am the Greatest of All~

~I am the Greatest of All~

A Poem by Ray
"

In the darkness...hear the warcries...

"


In the Darkness
The Gloom of the Shadows
Hear the Warcries
The Doom that Bellows

The Stars have fallen
Away from the Sky
And the Earth in her Wrath
Has burnt All, and stands By

'Let the Doom of Men befall,
Beg Mercy and Love
All ye who Hear
From the One Above

That this may come as
A lesson unto all
That I, the Lord
Am Greatest of All'

© 2012 Ray


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Ray
Popped into my mind...

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Dear Ray,

This is a very nice poem. It is well phrased, which elevates it above the common fare on WC. If this was not intensional, then you have a natural knack for the poetic form. And if intentional, my hat's off to you. Very well done. We may differ philosophically, but I cannot deny the grace of this poem.

This was deeply enjoyed and earns high marks.

Best regards,

Rick

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ray

7 Years Ago

Thank you for this very kind comment =)



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This piece sent me shivers. Your imagery and poetic flair brought out a stunning war-cry. I enjoyed this greatly!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Ray

7 Years Ago

thank you =)
Night

7 Years Ago

You're welcome!
This is wonderful.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amen. Fine write, young man.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ray

7 Years Ago

Thank you & it's young lady =)
Dear Ray,

This is a very nice poem. It is well phrased, which elevates it above the common fare on WC. If this was not intensional, then you have a natural knack for the poetic form. And if intentional, my hat's off to you. Very well done. We may differ philosophically, but I cannot deny the grace of this poem.

This was deeply enjoyed and earns high marks.

Best regards,

Rick

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ray

7 Years Ago

Thank you for this very kind comment =)
I really like writing that has a kind of a flow, which 'I am the Greatest' had.
I would show the lines that I thought were the best, but then I would be repeating the whole poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ray

7 Years Ago

Thank you for that !!!!! :)
PurpleQuartz

7 Years Ago

You're welcome : )

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