Chestnut locks

Originality oozes from every pore

If you wanted, my heart would be yours

Your charm is simple as well as alluring

Who knew chestnut tangles could be so stirring?

I could only wish to be like you

To do what you love and to love what you do.

Reviews

[Angel's Lady]

Oh my gosh, I love that line!

Your charm is simple as well as alluring
Who knew chestnut tangles could be so stirring?

This is going in My Favorites! Thank you for writing this! So charming!

[Clockwork]

I'm not sure if I am reading the tone of this piece right, but it almost seems like it is sarcastic and biting. The description of the person seems like it could be taken as something to avoid rather than embrace.

I really liked the line "Originality oozes from every pore"

Well written

[KatiePie]

I really like the flow of this especially at the ending, its simple, but thats what makes it charming. "Who knew chestnut tangles could be so charming" that was my favorite line because again, it has that simplicity to it, but it also has this enchanting feel to it. Beautiful write, I loved reading it. Thank you for sharing. :)
-Cathrine

[chillz]

simple yet effective,great job :)