Another Day to You

waking up and wanting to give the entire day to her

I awake so aroused by you,

You sing life into me,

In pure verses that give their due.

Bounded to you dearly,

I give this day, like those before.

No lesser honor would be pure.

I give this day.

I give this day.

Regret never reaches my shore.

I awake so aroused by you,

Completely taken back.

Entranced by simple morning dew;

Eyes full of you I lack.

What is a day these eyes lose sight,

Of the one thing they dream at night.

What is a day?

What is a day?

Leave me sleep till the world is right.

I awake so aroused by you,

Anxious to drink you up, 

I can think no other task through;

My spirit is the cup.

Another day I give to you,

While basking in your fiery hue.

Another day!

Another day!

May it prove adequate and true.

Author's Note

For my muse, I hope this one births a smile on her face. My 1st attempt at a Trijan Refrain; thanks to Shelly A. for exposing me to it. Your thoughts are welcomed, thank you for reading.

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

this is beautiful and lyrical - would lend itself so well to being a song.

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thank you, you constantly humble me.

[Jack V.]

Describes how I feel each morning when I wake and want my love at my side. Nicely erotic with a splash of romance.

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

I'm honored you relate to it so intimately.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This is truly beautiful and romantic...
You write with such passion and heart, that makes this piece even more amazing...
i feel the emotions and love oozing out of this piece :)
i also love the flow of it... the rhyming is great as well.

i love how you have done this:

I give this day.
I give this day.

What is a day?
What is a day?

Another day!
Another day!

It sounds so poetic like that :)
Amazing job :)

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thank you, I am humbled beyond words. I owe that phrasing pattern to the format: Trijan Refrain. It really added weight to my words here.

[BlueZan]

This is beautiful and romantic and wonderfully written. I want there to be more! I want soft acoustic guitar behind it, I want it stuck in my head. I certainly hope this brought a smile to its intended because it well deserves it.

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thank you so very much for an amazing review of this. It actually did make my muse smile.

[Clara]

What a wonderful write. The love is so tangible in this.

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thank you for such wonderful thoughts on this piece.

[Oyindamola Shoola]

I love it......very romantic and nice rhymes

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thank you, your review is much appreciated.

[Cassie]

This is a very romantic piece of poetry. I did enjoy reading. Thank you for sharing

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

And thank you for leaving me with your thoughts, I'm glad you enjoyed this piece.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Such a proclamation of love... There is nothing better or truer than wanting (without reservation or thought of self) to give to another. When you have found someone who illicits this feeling within you, hold on for dear life, because it doesn't happen everyday. You've captured many beautiful thoughts and images in this one...and for sheer emotion I say Bravo.

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

And I thank you as much as I am humbled by your words, completely.

[Angel of Chaos]

This is such a lovely piece. Thank you for sharing this.

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thank you for coming and leaving your thoughts on this piece.