Another Day to You

waking up and wanting to give the entire day to her

I awake so aroused by you,

You sing life into me,

In pure verses that give their due.

Bounded to you dearly,

I give this day, like those before.

No lesser honor would be pure.

I give this day.

I give this day.

Regret never reaches my shore.

I awake so aroused by you,

Completely taken back.

Entranced by simple morning dew;

Eyes full of you I lack.

What is a day these eyes lose sight,

Of the one thing they dream at night.

What is a day?

What is a day?

Leave me sleep till the world is right.

I awake so aroused by you,

Anxious to drink you up, 

I can think no other task through;

My spirit is the cup.

Another day I give to you,

While basking in your fiery hue.

Another day!

Another day!

May it prove adequate and true.

Author's Note

For my muse, I hope this one births a smile on her face. My 1st attempt at a Trijan Refrain; thanks to Shelly A. for exposing me to it. Your thoughts are welcomed, thank you for reading.

Reviews

[Rachelle]

Lovely, lovely flow of words.....

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thank you, I owe that to the format.

[Sami Khalil]

"I awake so aroused by you,

Anxious to drink you up,

I can think no other task through;

My spirit is the cup."

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thank you, dear friend.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).................

[Cleide Tatyana Almeida]

first of all high praise always goes to your works' rhyme scheme and sense of rhythm, this piece is no exception. Bravo!....I'd never heard of Trijan Refrain before now (off to google it any second now) but it's a brilliant format...the true modern muse is increasingly rare, oft we find objectified people rather than true sources of pure inspiration as a muse ought to be! your love, passion and lust for this woman are evident in this work without being cheesy or tacky! quite a feat, that. A pleasure to read, thanks for the request

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

And as always, you leave me with little or no words in response. I am always thankful and humbled to have you give me such sincere thoughts on my work. I had to google this form of poetry as well when I first came upon it. It was an intimidating task, but words such as yours have made it worth the effort.

[Cleide Tatyana Almeida]

awwww most welcome!....currently unable to send read requests but check out my poem 'Monster'

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

heading over now. ;)

[Angi]

Shelley A is wonderful for showing us new forms, isn't she? I haven't seen her around lately. Travis, this piece shows such love. There is hope that he can really give her is everything and that she will recognise that he is trying so hard to do that. Really nice. Angi~

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Yes, Shelly is wonderful in that regard, she's a wonderful student/teacher of the craft. I do hope she returns to give me an honest critique of the execution of this piece. I do thank you beyond words for yet another uplifting review, you are truly a good friend.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is a lovely Tribute to your muse... Your heart pours on this page...
The flow of words are soft, romantic, and loving... best of all it's passionate.

Wonderfully penned!~xoxo~:)

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thank you, so very much for a fantastic review on this piece.

[Lyn Anderson]

I like this a lot - it has a beautiful tempo, melody and feel to it. Well done.

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thank you so much for the great review. Its very much appreciated.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem my writer friend. It is good to be excited by another. Give us energy and hope. When we yearn for the touch and feel of body near. We know real and true peace. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thank you for the outstanding review, Coyote. As always, you make it easy to share my work here.

[s y e]

Beautiful Travis, a divine piece from you! True love and romance, I think we all want it at some point...

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

That we do. Thank you for a lovely review, Noodle. You always leave me humbled.

[Rita L. Sev]

This is a gorgeously worded piece, Travis, and you have done a great job with this form. True love and romance, singing from your pen...

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thank you so much for a fantastic review, Rita. I actually was doubting my wording of this piece, you've helped me get over that.

[annabellee]

what a gorgeous poem. Sweet and emotional.
I enjoyed reading it a lot :)

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thank you so much for a lovely review, Annabellee. I am glad you enjoyed it.

[annabellee]

you are most welcome, thanks for sharing :)