Who broke the window?

   

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I didn't break the window

I threw the RULES out...

quite nicely

Now I see my own view

and I like what I see

I am looking closely at your view

quite beautiful

I love your view

I respect your view

as I should

broken windows

do not have to be

Reviews

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

This is nice and witty, Holly. You are creative, too.
Love these lines:
"I respect your view
as I should
broken windows
do not have to be"

Respect is what we should give to each other. Well-penned. Keep writing.

[Renée]

Witty, creative and to the point well done !

[Holly Mason]

thank you much and truly

[Renée]

my pleasure Holly, a thinker ( :

[Dr. Wood ?]

A clever poem Holly, it is true that we all see things differently but it does help to try to see from the other person's perspective

[Holly Mason]

thank you very much fine fun sir*)

[s y e]

This is so clever, Holls! :D I loved it.

Who's the smart cookie now....? Ha, YOU!

Awesome blossom!

~ Noodle.

[Holly Mason]

Awesome blossom- adorable statement
thank you little princess

[s y e]

Haha, glad you liked it. Always a pleasure, doll.

[ANTO]

Very inventive Holly - great visual device - is it double glazed?
I like your style

[Holly Mason]

double glazed...like that much
thank you for reading

[Rita L. Sev]

Clever form, wonderful poem. Great job, Holly.

[Holly Mason]

thank you teach

[A. H. Pinley]

Nice work Holly!

[Holly Mason]

Thank you A.H. Pinley!!! truly fine sir

[Holly Mason]

and the jury has been picked...now the show begins

[Holly Mason]

I do love your rebelish tongue. It has something very needed on this place ;) you don't hurt, never, yet you make your point for I admire that. This was splendid.

- Elisa

[Holly Mason]

a rebelish tongue- like this thought
thank you beauty writer ...it is so nice to see you

You're most welcome, it's good to see you too dear! :)

[Tree]

This was great, Holly. The ceativeness, the poem and its structure; but more importantly, the meaning. Very cool.

[Holly Mason]

thank you very much...truly

[OBWhiteHawk]

This is really an original piece, not just of poetry but a piece of art. Looking deeper into the symbolism of this, I love what your saying here. I love and respect your view also. ;)