Who broke the window?

Who broke the window?

A Poem by Holly Mason

   
                                          WINDOWFRAMEWINDOWFRAMEWINDOWFRAME
                                           I                                                           I 
                                          N                                                          N
                                          D                                                          D
                                          O                                                         O
                                          W                                                         W                                                  
                                          F                                                          F
                                          R                                                          R
                                          A                                                          A
                                          M                                                         M
                                          EWINDOWFRAMEWINDOWFRAMEWINDOWFRAM
I didn't break the window
I threw the RULES out...
quite nicely
Now I see my own view
and I like what I see
I am looking closely at your view
quite beautiful
I love your view
I respect your view
as I should
broken windows
do not have to be

© 2013 Holly Mason


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

This is nice and witty, Holly. You are creative, too.
Love these lines:
"I respect your view
as I should
broken windows
do not have to be"

Respect is what we should give to each other. Well-penned. Keep writing.



Posted 7 Years Ago


Witty, creative and to the point well done !

Posted 7 Years Ago


Holly Mason

7 Years Ago

thank you much and truly
Renée

7 Years Ago

my pleasure Holly, a thinker ( :
A clever poem Holly, it is true that we all see things differently but it does help to try to see from the other person's perspective

Posted 7 Years Ago


Holly Mason

7 Years Ago

thank you very much fine fun sir*)
This is so clever, Holls! :D I loved it.

Who's the smart cookie now....? Ha, YOU!

Awesome blossom!

~ Noodle.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Holly Mason

7 Years Ago

Awesome blossom- adorable statement
thank you little princess
s y e

7 Years Ago

Haha, glad you liked it. Always a pleasure, doll.
Very inventive Holly - great visual device - is it double glazed?
I like your style

Posted 7 Years Ago


Holly Mason

7 Years Ago

double glazed...like that much
thank you for reading
Clever form, wonderful poem. Great job, Holly.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Holly Mason

7 Years Ago

thank you teach
Nice work Holly!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Holly Mason

7 Years Ago

Thank you A.H. Pinley!!! truly fine sir
Holly Mason

7 Years Ago

and the jury has been picked...now the show begins
I do love your rebelish tongue. It has something very needed on this place ;) you don't hurt, never, yet you make your point for I admire that. This was splendid.

- Elisa

Posted 7 Years Ago


Holly Mason

7 Years Ago

a rebelish tongue- like this thought
thank you beauty writer ...it is so nice to see you

7 Years Ago

You're most welcome, it's good to see you too dear! :)
This was great, Holly. The ceativeness, the poem and its structure; but more importantly, the meaning. Very cool.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Holly Mason

7 Years Ago

thank you very much...truly
This is really an original piece, not just of poetry but a piece of art. Looking deeper into the symbolism of this, I love what your saying here. I love and respect your view also. ;)

Posted 7 Years Ago



First Page first
Previous Page prev
1
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

323 Views
11 Reviews
Rating
Added on June 14, 2013
Last Updated on June 14, 2013

Author

Holly Mason
Holly Mason

Rockledge, FL



About
I have recently learned that maybe I can write.I have recently learned that this is my last year.I have recently learned that I will write to the end.I am a whimsical writer a writer of whim.What ever.. more..

Writing
Yup Yup

A Poem by Holly Mason



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Going down Going down

A Poem by Jack...