Why am I not acceptable for your love?

Why am I not acceptable for your love?

A Poem by Daughter of Darkness
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Why she doesn't like me.

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Why not?
Why am I not acceptable for your love?

Am I to short?
Am I to tall?
Are you embarrassed by my scars?
By my depression?
Am I not pretty enough?
Why am I not acceptable for your love?

Do I fangirl to much?
Is it not your thing?
Am I to girly girl
Am I to Tom boy?
Why am I not acceptable for your love?

I love you.
You don't seem to see.
Why am I not
Acceptable
For your
Love?

© 2015 Daughter of Darkness


Author's Note

Daughter of Darkness
Can you tell me if I messed up on grammar and give your honest opinion? Thanks.

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okay love let me just tell u that people suck and are terrible.....okay there ain't nothing wrong with you ..ur talented and I'm sure ur beautiful as well.....
As for the poem it's powerful and depressing but u conveyed ur emotions very well

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daughter of Darkness

8 Years Ago

Thank you. :)
micky

8 Years Ago

ur welcome :) hugs :)

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Added on June 18, 2015
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Daughter of Darkness
Daughter of Darkness

Westminster , SC



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I'm a mess. That's the best summary of me there is. I'm a fu**** up mess. I'm 15 ( ok,ok, I'm 14 but I will be 15 SOON )and I've already had many failed suicide attempts. I self harm. I wish I could s.. more..

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