I Can See

It was a random piece, that fed off creativity.

I Can See

 

I can see

Through you

 

I can see

Your palette

Of feelings

 

Your truth

Betrayals

An uneven aura

 

I can see

Your lies

The dark side

Unnerved

 

I can see

Your serenity

Calmness

With nature

 

I can see

The uncertainty

With others

When your not

Sure of yourself

 

I can see

The playfulness

The sparkle

The friendship

To the fragile

 

I can see

More than you

Wish

 

But you can see more.

Author's Note

I quite liked the originality...

Reviews

[bonbon7810]

You are an amazing writer and your writing is so unique. It speaks to people!

[Marie Harrison]

Oh this really speaks to me. I can tell this is a relationship that is really developing now. When we start to peek behind the mask of one another. Probably the most critical time that a relationship has. Will they stay or go, once they get to know the real me? A lot said in a few words. Clever poem.

[Dupree]

I love this. You are an amazing poet

[Ivy]

I really like it! The phrasing is great, it's really creative! =]

[TravelMySoul]

It's amazing.
The rhythm is very catchy.
And I love the twist at the end.