Who Knows?

Who Knows?

A Poem by Hamkar
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Another burst of creativity...

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Who Knows?

Who knows,

The truth behind

The smile?

 

Who knows,

The hidden remarks,

Concealed,

In the smile?

 

Who knows,

The meaning

Of a cheerless

Smile?

 

Who knows,

What is going on

In the head,

Behind that smile?

 

Who knows

Your smile

Is fake,

Apart from me?

 

Who knows

You aren’t real.

Just a

Smile...

 

Who knows

What earth holds,

If it only holds

Fake smiles?

 

Who knows

The answer

Of your history?

 

Who knows

When you only smile.

 

Who knows,

Why you

Live?

 

Who knows

You,

Like they know

Themselves?

 

No one.

Not even you,

And your fake smile.

© 2010 Hamkar


Author's Note

Hamkar
Who knows,
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this is really cool...i like the way you used the repetition of "smile"...good work.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Hamkar
Hamkar

Nelson, New Zealand



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