To You

To You

A Poem by Hamkar
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Directed at a soldier going to war, but not restricted.

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To You

May you do your best but not any better.

May you learn from your mistakes.

May you forgive the world.

May you live.

I believe in you.

© 2010 Hamkar


Author's Note

Hamkar
I'm intrigued by war at the moment, and it is a note of inspiration to a soldier. It can also be a note to whoever fits.

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Hey i like this piece, in fact it has inspired my own little idea thanks :) The poem seems as if its a soilder that has wrote a small letter to a family he has back home. Very sweet keep it up matey! Oh btw i released two need poems.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I'm am intrigued by war too. I have been for some time now. I really like this poem and the simplicity of it. Yet it holds faith in the soldier. I have so much respect and honor for our American soldiers and veterans. They are so brave. Great poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Hamkar
Hamkar

Nelson, New Zealand



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