Seasons

Cancerous night

The seasons all too quickly flee 

Those times we spent in summer glee 

Gave way to chilly autumn cold 

Now snow waters the florists' gold 

Rainy, sunny, seasonal weather 

They came, they went, four times over 

Seasons metamorphosed along with you 

Once, thrice and then it grew 

I won't lie to you and say 

There'll be no grey gloomy days 

Sometimes, the clouds cover the sun 

And darkness creeps in when the day is done 

It is easy to fly away 

So easy to run astray 

It is even easier to fold 

When the nights, they get too cold 

I can't promise to hold up the sun 

I can't promise it'll all be fun 

I can't promise all butterflies 

I can't promise the flowers won't die 

I am only human, so you see 

That there is only one of me 

At times I need some support too 

So darling, please help me and I'll help you 

As seasons, they rotate and change 

One promise has always remained 

Whatever the weather, dark or blue 

Mist or heat, I'm here with you 

Author's Note

As always, a 5 minute rant/purge

Reviews

[DJ]

A well written and emotional piece here, I can tell it is written directly from the heart. You have such a nice writing style, 5 min rant produces your most emotional work. Really enjoyed reading this. I hope that they days remain sunny for you and your partner.

[Hana Saemon]

It's not always rainbows and butterflies, it's compromise... *sings* lol. Anyway, ure too kind. It's nothing great but thank you for your kind words. :)

[DJ]

It is great. Compromise what with what? I don't understand.

[Hana Saemon]

It's a song! Maroon 5. Lol

[DJ]

HAHAHA ohhhhh yes, I know that one, my bad! LOL

[Hana Saemon]

Haha that song came to my mind when u said sunny. Lol

[Tom]

A pleasing comparison here, between the ever changing seasonal weather and the promise of a trusting relationship through the good days and the bad ones, if commitment & love are reciprocated on level terms!

Well penned, nice thoughts expressed into words !

[London's Lily]

What a splendid way of depicting your never-ending love during the ever-changing seasons... The fact that relationships are indeed comparable to seasons ~ sometimes cold and grey, sometimes sunny and warm ~ enhances the beauty and validity of the story you tell here. Lovely writing! :)

[Hana Saemon]

Thank you for your kind comments :). We've been going through a bit of grey because of his tumour, and he is understandably frustrated with his sickness and memory loss, and i cant promise it'll all be fine, but i can promise whatever the weather, i'll be by his side. Just a short write to purge my feelings. Best way to destress i feel. :)

[Kris]

This is such a lovely piece! This is a very vivid and controversial look at love all wrapped in nice metaphors and imagery. And I couldn't help but fall in love with this piece!

[Hana Saemon]

Hey Chrissy, thank you so much for your kind words. Im really glad you've enjoyed this. :)