Atashi no Kokoro...

I feel my eyes is getting wet

Then a tear falling to my cheek

Its, first, second, third

Then I can’t count anymore

 

Having feeling like this

Its suck

Why.....

I can’t stop crying?

 

Can u hear me..

Hear I’m crying?

Can u hear me?

My heart shouting out loud!

 

Atashi no kokoro....

Ittai! Ittai!

I can’t hold it!

Please.....

 

I feel..

Better I have no heart

So, I will not feel this

Anymore...

 

I won’t feel this

Never ever again.

Let me be a heartless person

So, I can always smile

 

Author's Note

This is just how I feel.
Sorry to use Japanese.
Ittai=hurt

Reviews

[Dark Rider]

I think the Japanese made it better. It was a great poem, and I can relate to it. Nice job. :)

[Akashi]

Sore wa daijobuda, watashi wa anata no shi ga sukidesu.

[Shirohana]

...
Nee.. Hontou?

[Akashi]

Nani?

[Shirohana]

Nandemonai..
Arigatou ^^

[Akashi]

Oke.

[Hatchling]

Sweet and innocent. Nice piece

[Shirohana]

Thanks~

[Shivam Murari]

Very sweet and innocent. Deep and grounded emotions. The words from a different language "Atashi no kokoro ittai ittai". Is it Japanese? They only make the poem sparkle more. A nice piece.

[Shirohana]

Ah, yea.. Sometimes I use Japanese.
Good to hear it, thank you..

[Shivam Murari]

:)

[PureHeaven]

That is incredibly deep. I can feel the emotions.
The Japanese is great in there, it really helps it flow.
Brilliant poem.

[Shirohana]

Good to hear it..
Thank you~