Inhumanity

Inhumanity

A Poem by Hidden Happiness
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Let's put an end to animal torture...please read the author's note.

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I am a cruel soul 
My source of happiness- causing you pain
I hear you whimper
Your pleading eyes wanting me to stop but on my oath i shall retain 
I will cause you pain.

I shall wait till you bleed,
Till your bones start to break,
And your breathing becomes slow 
And mercy is all you need 
But I shall wait for that last whimper
And then i will put an end to this pleasure.

Oh god how good i feel
There you lie, soulless on the street
Your blood slowly oozing from that furry body of yours
As i smile my ruthless smile
I have found my pleasure
I have caused you pain.

© 2012 Hidden Happiness


Author's Note

Hidden Happiness
i saw this picture on facebook of a man hauling a dog across the street, the dog tied to his motorbike....and i wrote this poem from his point of vie..god this created such a huge pressure on me that i had to get rid of it...then they gave a picture of the dog in the hospital and said it was recovering but it looked so helpless and traumatized...please please let's try and put an end to the inhuman torture to animals..please:(

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These types of people are disgusting.
Releasing your anger on a harmless animal, that has done nothing to you?
Terrible. Thanks for the poem. Animal cruelty is a problem which should be more publicized in order for prevention.


Posted 8 Years Ago


Hidden Happiness

8 Years Ago

Thank u n yes i agree with u...such people are disgusting:-):-D:-).
D: Wow, amazing poem... I'm not naive, but I never really thought about animal abusers before. I'm inspired to look into how I can help prevent it now, though :) That shows how talented you are! Great job!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


ugh only a very sad sociopath can do something like that.

dogs are very trusting.....most of the dogs of Michael Vick got rehabilated. The dogs were scared of humans when they got rescued then most of them started to trust humans again. a few dogs had to be put down becuz they were so mean and didnt trush anyone. great piece on awareness :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Hidden Happiness

8 Years Ago

thank you so much:-).
I admire your outrage against cruelty towards animals, and the way you wrote this.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Hidden Happiness

8 Years Ago

thank you:-).
yeah, I figured you u were describing it from someone else's perspective
it's horrible when you have to purge and can't make sense of such things
this is heart wrenching
but I also saw on facebook about a homeless guy had someone throw his rabbit off a bridge..he jumped in to save it and they threw the person in jail that threw the rabbit and they gave the homeless guy food and a job...the world isn't all bad :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Shmoke-Sifted Heftlander

8 Years Ago

also you did an amazing job of getting your point across..very effective
Hidden Happiness

8 Years Ago

thank you and yeah i guess the world is still good....depends on how you look at it:-).
I read this, in shock, and was appalled-until I read your author's note. I applaud your work. pat

Posted 8 Years Ago


Hidden Happiness

8 Years Ago

thanks a lot...it really means so much:)
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I concur; I love/admire the fact that you wrote this poem. You are a great person for spreading awareness, and I stand behind you all the way :) Great work

Posted 8 Years Ago


Hidden Happiness

8 Years Ago

thanks so much...i was really traumatized and hurt by the picture and i had to let people know about.. read more
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8 Years Ago

You did a great job :)
The idea that you could be so horrible to a defenseless animal is horrible! Thank god for people like you recognizing how awful it is and speaking out against it. Your poem puts it into view how awful it is, do you think you could also do one from the dog's point of view? I think that drive the message home.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Hidden Happiness

8 Years Ago

thank you and definitely ill try
RachelReaper

8 Years Ago

send it to me if you finish it :)

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Added on July 12, 2012
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