Dancing around in the Dark

Dancing around in the Dark

A Poem by Dezarae
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a poem in the POV of Kaz`e talking about his feelings for DJ and how much he feels that he loves her. He doesnt know whether to stay with her or to let her go from the danger she will be with him.

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Dancing among the fires of despair,
Clinging to the dark abyss 
with nothing to live for,

I see a bright light above,
The very light that flies as elegant

should i be left in the darkness to rot,
Or  go to her and feel what I always wanted to feel

I choose her

Because I was sure
That I could be happy again

lovely as a dove,
She reaches out to me with a heart of gold,
Calling out to me with a sweet, mesmerizing voice

She gives me a choice
I could stay in the dark or  go to her 
I choose her 
because i feel she could make me happy again.

© 2012 Dezarae


Author's Note

Dezarae
idk let me know if you like it ^^

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I love the opening line, it's very powerful and strong, a nice lead-in to the topic of love and hope. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dezarae

11 Years Ago

thank you very much ^^
Ok, I like it lol... But really I do like it

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dezarae

11 Years Ago

thank you so much ^^
Adam M. Snow

11 Years Ago

You're utmost welcome

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Added on August 9, 2012
Last Updated on August 9, 2012
Tags: love, darkness, light, emotions