Game Over

Game Over

A Story by Juria Kurosaki
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(Fullmetal Alchemist Fanfiction) I really don't know how to explain this one, so you'd just have to read it and figure out if you like it or not yourself.

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"Game Over"

The dark haired man smirked, "Game over." He said. The golden boy sitting on top of him smiled almost sadly. "This is a game neither of us would win anyway." The flowered sword shot toward the man on the ground as the other snapped his fingers sending spirals of flame toward the boy. Blood fueled the fire that he had set and they burned. Holding each other in a tight embrace as the fire surrounded them, and as they turned to nothing but ash and dust and blood.

© 2016 Juria Kurosaki


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I loved it, for it's simplicity and the way it summed up the futility of maybe war, duels or combat. No one ever wins through violence, there is always something to loose by both sides.

I can understand the reasoning and that it is fiction, but blood wouldn't be left behind when both are consumed and turned into ash and dust, yet, I don't know the story you based it off so there may be a factor I am not aware of :)

A great, fun little piece. Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


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I loved it, for it's simplicity and the way it summed up the futility of maybe war, duels or combat. No one ever wins through violence, there is always something to loose by both sides.

I can understand the reasoning and that it is fiction, but blood wouldn't be left behind when both are consumed and turned into ash and dust, yet, I don't know the story you based it off so there may be a factor I am not aware of :)

A great, fun little piece. Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 31, 2015
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Tags: Fullmetal alchemist, short story, story, sad, character death

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Juria Kurosaki
Juria Kurosaki

St. Louis, MO



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Hi, I'm a sixteen year old girl who writes short stories and poems! Usually my short stories are FMA fan fictions but my poems are original. My inspiration is usually from pictures that I've seen. I s.. more..

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