Unplayable Melodies

Unplayable Melodies

A Poem by Helena



unplayable melodies remain
unfinished symphonies refrain
love songs not yet sung
a violin yet to be strung

a sunflower who can't face the sun
the fair maiden's heart yet to be won
folk tales of realms still undiscovered
the rainbows end with no gold recovered

the book of romance waiting to be read
a couplet to warm a cold bed
a nightingale's exquisite notes
gone terribly wrong

heights so heady not yet conquered
unexplored courses to be charted
a garden of delights delivered
a soul mate discovered ~



(c) H M  Crutchett (All rights reserved)
 


© 2023 Helena


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Thank you for reading my words! ~ Helena ~

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A amazing poem shared dear Helena.
"a sunflower who can't face the sun
the fair maiden's heart yet to be won
folk tales of realms still undiscovered
the rainbows end with no gold recovered"
The above lines, we must be. Waiting for some kind of sunshine to make us feel alive. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

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This was beautiful. A very melodic piece that incorporates music and desire very nicely. This felt soft and as if floating while I read. You are very talented.

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very nice sentiment here. as long as we are alive there is something to be done.

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What a beautiful poem of wanting. Just reading it makes me want and need.

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4! I only get 4 poems from you! Get drunk, follow whatever process you need, you have a way with words that needs to be prolific. You are an order of magnitude better than the rest of the people that try to put words together. Post all the stuff you don't love, it's probably still better than my best.

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Enjoy discovering about your soulmate

It's a never-ending quest

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An incredibly well-written poem. Sensitive with strong feelings and reflection of thoughts. Beautiful verses, congratulations!

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A amazing poem shared dear Helena.
"a sunflower who can't face the sun
the fair maiden's heart yet to be won
folk tales of realms still undiscovered
the rainbows end with no gold recovered"
The above lines, we must be. Waiting for some kind of sunshine to make us feel alive. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

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Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful write! I love rhyming couplets and you've done them to perfection. ~Sharon

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Added on July 3, 2020
Last Updated on March 1, 2023
Tags: melodies, sunflower, violin, romance

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Banora Point, N.S.W., Australia



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