Moon's Decay

Moon's Decay

A Poem by Ella

Moon's Decay


I bloom, I bloom
I fly away
I land, I land
and cry away
The sorrow from my yesterday
the day that came from the
Moon's Decay,
will give me life
for another day.

© 2015 Ella


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Ella
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This seems to be another way of writing about depression although you do not list it as one of your tags. I interpret it it as one who experiences a bout of happiness only to land in the same sad place as before. A full moon is a beautiful thing for one who is flying high in a joyful sense, but its decay foreshadows a landing that is soon to come.

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I have no words.....my voice is in my awe!! This is solemn, touching, and at the same time profound. Well done!

Posted 1 Year Ago


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There is this clear cycle in your words
marking the end of a sad phase

Like the moon going through so many phases

Perfect

Posted 3 Years Ago


I like it, it's simple and straight to the point with a great massage and rhythm. I also like the imagery in The Moon's Decay it was perfect. This is an excellent poetry, keep up the good work.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ella

3 Years Ago

Thanks I'm glad you liked it! :)
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You have posted a different phase of moon. Amazing to read, great work!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A great positive outlook into the future. This was great, short, and to the point. Loved it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ella

3 Years Ago

Glad you liked it!
This seems to be another way of writing about depression although you do not list it as one of your tags. I interpret it it as one who experiences a bout of happiness only to land in the same sad place as before. A full moon is a beautiful thing for one who is flying high in a joyful sense, but its decay foreshadows a landing that is soon to come.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I thought the concept of a decaying moon and what it represents was pretty clever
Thanks for sharing!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ella

3 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Life is just like the two sides of a coin.One time it will turn out head and the next time it may be tail....There is no gurantee of consistancy.....The poem may be short but the message its bearing is very large and deeply thought provoking.....This is why writerscafe is a lifeline to me, i get to learn so many things in this talented family....Thank you frnd for your work....God bless you....

Posted 3 Years Ago


Ella

3 Years Ago

Exactly. Thank you
Like the sun the moon rise and sets and yet takes time to fade to nothing. Life does seem to be that way. Good days, bad days and days you just want to hide a way. But then like you missing, it arises again. Well done

Posted 3 Years Ago


Ella

3 Years Ago

Thanks for the review! Glad you got the message.

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