Moon's Decay

Moon's Decay

I bloom, I bloom

I fly away

I land, I land

and cry away

The sorrow from my yesterday

the day that came from the

Moon's Decay,

will give me life

for another day.

Author's Note

Sorry I haven't posted in a while.

Reviews

[cloud]

This seems to be another way of writing about depression although you do not list it as one of your tags. I interpret it it as one who experiences a bout of happiness only to land in the same sad place as before. A full moon is a beautiful thing for one who is flying high in a joyful sense, but its decay foreshadows a landing that is soon to come.

[emipoemi]

I have no words.....my voice is in my awe!! This is solemn, touching, and at the same time profound. Well done!

[Nisreen]

There is this clear cycle in your words
marking the end of a sad phase

Like the moon going through so many phases

Perfect

[HummingMaster]

I like it, it's simple and straight to the point with a great massage and rhythm. I also like the imagery in The Moon's Decay it was perfect. This is an excellent poetry, keep up the good work.

[Ella]

Thanks I'm glad you liked it! :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

You have posted a different phase of moon. Amazing to read, great work!

[M.E.Lyle]

A great positive outlook into the future. This was great, short, and to the point. Loved it.

[Ella]

Glad you liked it!

[Gaston Villanueva]

I thought the concept of a decaying moon and what it represents was pretty clever
Thanks for sharing!

[Ella]

Thank you :)

[Inject Positivity]

Life is just like the two sides of a coin.One time it will turn out head and the next time it may be tail....There is no gurantee of consistancy.....The poem may be short but the message its bearing is very large and deeply thought provoking.....This is why writerscafe is a lifeline to me, i get to learn so many things in this talented family....Thank you frnd for your work....God bless you....

[Ella]

Exactly. Thank you

[Willard Wells]

Like the sun the moon rise and sets and yet takes time to fade to nothing. Life does seem to be that way. Good days, bad days and days you just want to hide a way. But then like you missing, it arises again. Well done

[Ella]

Thanks for the review! Glad you got the message.