Crash

Why do the stars shine?

Gracefull

stars

give the simple gift of....

light.

Shine....the world over.

Peppering over the darkness

with

a twilight ballet.

Admission is free.

Simple beauty.

Yet when they are gone

will they be

missed?

When the world passes by,

romantics look up.

While everyone else

is

still

too

ignorant.

And then

they'll

crash.

Author's Note

This poem is just over 2 years old. Not going to change it much. Just want an honest opinion.

Reviews

[poetic soul]

honestly....loved the concept and also the articulation.. especially the end, it just hit it off! thoughtful yet light piece....

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul