A Poem by Hidden_identity

The color of being alone

A feeling that's shown

The black hole of sins

that sucks you right in

The color of a beetle

The whistling kettle

The color of ink

The very opposite of pink

The color of poison

The mistakes that are chosen

Spaces that are empty

Forgotten dreams lost at sea


Why does black

mean bad?

Most things you think of

When you think of black

are negative.

Poor, poor color black

© 2010 Hidden_identity

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"The mistakes that are chosen
Spaces that are empty
Forgotten dreams lost at sea" this line...:-)
great poetry!!!:-)


Posted 10 Years Ago

Nice, and fun to read.

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Thought I'd stop by and check out your work. I really like this about black. I love black and wear it nearly every day (except not in this pic!) It gets a bad rap too often. But always will be my personal favorite. Good work!

Posted 10 Years Ago

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3 Reviews
Added on July 8, 2010
Last Updated on August 16, 2010
Tags: black, beetle, kettle, sins, black hold, empty, dreams, sea, poison, pink, ink, mistakes



Neverland, SC

I am an aspiring writer. I am currently writing about five stories right now. I would really be grateful to hear what other people have to say about them other than my family. I am a very private pers.. more..