Why..does it still pain?

Why..does it still pain?

A Poem by Hímayun kuræshýe

Why do my eyes search for you everywhere?....although you left them in nothing but tears

Why do my feet take me to that road again ?....although you left me all alone in the middle of nowhere

Why do my hands keep feeling your touch?.....although you let go the bond so easily

Why is my heart still beating for you?...although you left it in ruins

Why do I still smile at you? ....,although you took it's meaning along

Why do I still hope ?....although you left me hopeless

Why do I still pretend to live?.....although you left me with nothing but to die

Why do i still care ...why do i still care?....although you never cared for me

Why do i still write ...why do I still write?.....although you are no more here to read


© 2014 Hímayun kuræshýe


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Questions of life and love, they are our daily burdens sometimes. You have put it here in your poem with the last question the most important I think. To ease the pain, the hurting it sometimes is good to write it down, to write it off you. Very well written
( a little remark, it has to be 'pains' in the title 3rd person simple tense, also with heart beats)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hímayun kuræshýe

9 Years Ago

thank u fr pointing out the mistake (s) ...looking forward fr ur valuable future reviews
Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

My pleasure, Himayun. I certainly will pass by. :)

Rudi



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Sad my friend, these feelings of emptiness. Why is it is so easy for one to shatter another? Very well written

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Questions of life and love, they are our daily burdens sometimes. You have put it here in your poem with the last question the most important I think. To ease the pain, the hurting it sometimes is good to write it down, to write it off you. Very well written
( a little remark, it has to be 'pains' in the title 3rd person simple tense, also with heart beats)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hímayun kuræshýe

9 Years Ago

thank u fr pointing out the mistake (s) ...looking forward fr ur valuable future reviews
Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

My pleasure, Himayun. I certainly will pass by. :)

Rudi
it's very touching... Nice poetry...!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hímayun kuræshýe

9 Years Ago

thank u ...i'm humbled :)
oh that hurts so much and you know I can relate and i know how it feels when you always expect that she is there and when you are sure she isnt, but you just try to lie to yourself ...
that was amZingly done,and hey... YOLO..you only live once..enjoy that one chance ride:D

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hímayun kuræshýe

9 Years Ago

thank uu....ya! i will try to enjoy it :)

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