Only but 8

Only but 8

A Poem by Hime_Chan

A bouncy girl only but 8,
Playing pretend with her Barbies,
And bouncing to a beat.
Smiling, giggling.
An ordinary day for a girl only but 8.

Shadows of the night had fallen,
the girl only but 8 snuggled into her bunny rabbit pink jammies.
She held her love-worm teddy bear tight,
When he appeared, a monster with cold fingers
- that trembled on her lips.
He whispered "hush", into her delicate ear.

The girl only but 8 choked with fear
-as the monster slid his sinful claws,
under her bunny rabbit pink jammies
She clutched her love-worn teddy tight, 
and closed her eyes with all her might.
As the monster stole away with her innocence.

The girl of 8 was now a scared lost soul
 -she did not want to play
 -she did not want to bounce
The girl of 8 only wanted to shout.
Yell out into the darkness,
Cry out into the night.
Clutching her love-worn teddy bear,
all the way into into the depths of her personal hell.

© 2013 Hime_Chan


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Wonderful piece of writing and I'm sure many will relate to your work


Posted 9 Years Ago


Oh wow! This is a remarkable piece, truly.
You captured every moment of such a horrifying experience. So very tragic. You caught me up in it and I wanted to hold her close and comfort her.

Though the subject matter is ugly.. It is beautiful work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hime_Chan

11 Years Ago

Thank you for the heartfelt review Rogue. This was something that is very hard to write about,but at.. read more
Hime_Chan

11 Years Ago

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Added on February 28, 2013
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Tags: Sexual abuse, sadness, stolen, innocence

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