Heading Home

 

These mountains are growing taller

The trees return to green

The sky is getting bluer

This is such a beautiful scene

 

I recall the scent in the air

It brings me peace of mind

My travels have taken me far

So many left to find

 

But this place is growing old now

It’s time to call it a day

I’m going back to where I came from

And there I plan to stay

 

Flying towards you

Suspended on golden wings

I take in a deep breath

As an angel choir sings

 

Take me away from here

I want to see my homeland

With the Lord in Heaven smiling

I touch his holy hand

 

“It isn’t your time now.”

And he sent me back to Earth

But now I’ll surely go back to Heaven

If I live for what it’s worth.

Reviews

[rachel D]

i think it's good. it's easy to read. and i like the second to last stanza but i'm a bit confused about the last 2 lines.
what exactly do you mean?
i'm not saying they don't work, i'm just curious as to how you figure that out?
anyways, good job!

[melancholia skies]

I happen to think it's great! It's very cute! ^^;

It made me smile. It shows that you should live out your life,
Even though you've been every where,
There's still things to see.
And it might not always be scenery,
It could be something else,
Something only you can see,
And only see it yourself.
No one else can live that memory.
Only you can. ^^

[Caleb]

I rather enjoyed this one.
Props.