Our Night

Don't be afraid..
I'm here.
Do not feel betrayed.
For I am here.
I'm going to turn off the light.
That shines too bright.

 

We'll go out at night.
The moon will disappear.
It will fade away,
My dear.
The darkness of the night.
Will turn pitch black.

And we won't have to holdback..

 

Your face,
I won't be able to see.
Our feelings will glow.
Can you see the view?
Open your heart.
You'll see it, even though it's dark..
I promise I'll treasure what you have given me.
I'll embrace it.

What we have is beautiful.
With our chalks,
We'll draw all night.
Until the sun rises.
I'll be gone.

You'll wake up..
Missing something,

that I've promised to embrace.

Author's Note

Review please.

Reviews

[Mauricio Montoya]

like how it comes together.
Excellent write.

[Dante Balsote]

The voice speaking seems confused, saying to someone at the beginning not to be afraid, yet in the end leaving him the day after. Or perhaps the reader is...

[Calypso]

So beautiful. This is so full of love and compassion. I have the image of the speaker as having golden, muscular skin and a silky voice. I better leave the room before this passionate love poem turns into erotica!

[PaperDoll]

Lovely. Very nice indeed. Simply written but very rich. Well done. :)

[My Fair Lady]

Simple, tender and filled with emotion. I love this piece.

[Madison A. Wright]

it reminds me of Cinderella...very nice poem, nice descriptions that gave me a nice visual..

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Very kind, this is a gentle piece, showing no fear.
Beautiful.

[Coyote Poetry]

A gentle and kind walk into the emotion and desire of love. I like the slow pace and sweet words. A excellent poem of love and emotion. Thank you.
Coyote

[trainwreck]

This was a very tasteful and excellent write. Thank you for sharing.

[Janice Ann]

What a lovely piece of writing. It left me there longing for what you had promised. I love the images and the words of description. You made my mind wander. Wonderful!