Our Night

Our Night

A Poem by Rafif
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Don't be afraid..
I'm here.
Do not feel betrayed.
For I am here.
I'm going to turn off the light.
That shines too bright.

 

We'll go out at night.
The moon will disappear.
It will fade away,
My dear.
The darkness of the night.
Will turn pitch black.

And we won't have to holdback..

 

Your face,
I won't be able to see.
Our feelings will glow.
Can you see the view?
Open your heart.
You'll see it, even though it's dark..
I promise I'll treasure what you have given me.
I'll embrace it.


What we have is beautiful.
With our chalks,
We'll draw all night.
Until the sun rises.
I'll be gone.

You'll wake up..
Missing something,

that I've promised to embrace.

© 2011 Rafif


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like how it comes together.
Excellent write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


The voice speaking seems confused, saying to someone at the beginning not to be afraid, yet in the end leaving him the day after. Or perhaps the reader is...

Posted 13 Years Ago


So beautiful. This is so full of love and compassion. I have the image of the speaker as having golden, muscular skin and a silky voice. I better leave the room before this passionate love poem turns into erotica!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Lovely. Very nice indeed. Simply written but very rich. Well done. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Simple, tender and filled with emotion. I love this piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago


it reminds me of Cinderella...very nice poem, nice descriptions that gave me a nice visual..

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very kind, this is a gentle piece, showing no fear.
Beautiful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


A gentle and kind walk into the emotion and desire of love. I like the slow pace and sweet words. A excellent poem of love and emotion. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was a very tasteful and excellent write. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


What a lovely piece of writing. It left me there longing for what you had promised. I love the images and the words of description. You made my mind wander. Wonderful!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on February 25, 2011
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Rafif
Rafif

Amman, Jordan



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