My friends...My family

My friends...My family

A Poem by Hivathi
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A poem about those I consider my family...

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When will they learn;

That it's their problems that hurt me the most...

 

I sit and I smile, hiding away the pain and sorrow I feel;

My friends ask why I hide, little do they know what I feel...

 

As the tears flew freely, hidden by my smile;

I help the friends who mean the world to me...

 

When the occasional tear catches their notice;

They ask why I'm crying, showing their concern...

 

I tell them nothing, hiding behind the smile once again;

They don't know what they mean to me, that it's their smile that gives me the strength to get up in the mourning...

 

Littile do they know how I view them, how I would die for them;

They are my family, the family I love...

© 2008 Hivathi


Author's Note

Hivathi
This isn't the best poem...but it's how I feel...
The first two lines are what I feel about those I'm related to by blood...

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A very emotional write, Family is all we will ever have so make the best of it, I iwhs i still had my family around, Wonderfully written....Kim

Posted 15 Years Ago


Very well written. I like the way you worded it. It really expressed how you "feel" and that is something that all writers should strive to accomplish. Cheers!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on August 3, 2008
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Hivathi
Hivathi

Saint Joseph, MO



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