I Can't Help but Wonder. (The thought of it)

I Can't Help but Wonder. (The thought of it)

A Poem by Sarah Flanigan

I can't help but wonder if
he's looking at the same stars tonight.
That thought makes my heart grow heavier.

I can't help but wonder if 
he slipped back into a particularly bad, old habit.
The thought of it makes my stomach hitch.

I can't help but wonder if
he still has that ivory colored guitar he was playing
when we first met.
That memory makes me feel inexplicably homesick.

I can't help but wonder if
he's stargazing in his back yard thinking of me too.
The thought makes my stupid heart miss him.

© 2015 Sarah Flanigan


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You described missing a loved one brilliantly! You ask the question twice, though, which seems a bit superfluous....(about whether he is stargazing too.....)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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I really enjoyed this how i felt this way one too many times ha! (:

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nice. I always think about being in other peoples' shoes when they are away. You showed that pretty clearly.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Sarah Flanigan
Sarah Flanigan

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I'm an introverted bookworm. I tend to spend my days drinking far too much coffee and playing my ukulele too loudly. Life is strange and surreal, but also beautiful somehow. more..

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