I'm Sorry

I'm Sorry

A Poem by HorrorMaster
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A poem about a friend made another friend sad and asking her forgiveness.

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I’m sorry I made you sad

I didn’t mean to make you mad at me

I hope you forgive me, so we can be friends

It will make me glad to see you smile.

I wish I can take back from what I said.

I would give you gifts.

If you could give me one more chance,

I will make you happy even more.

Please forgive me!

 

© 2010 HorrorMaster


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I have to say you've done well in expanding yourself out of the horror genre, leading into an awful lot of good poetry. I like that you've kept up incorporating songs into your stories and poem (especially since it's a nice remix), as it adds it's own atmosphere to the writing. Good work once again, I look forward to seeing what comes up next.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Once again, a very good work. Definitely growing as a poet.

Posted 9 Years Ago


thats sweet its not ur usuall stuff but its good

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sooooooooooo sweet!!!!!
u sure have a lighter side to yr poems Ira loved it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Awe soo cute. I love this poem. I like the step you took our of horror. It is a good step, but you are an awesome writer when it comes to horror. This was adorable though. I hope she forgave you.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This was struck me deeply, as I am prone to say things I later regret. Words can't be taken back, but forgiveness can be given. Thank you so much for sharing this amazing message..

Posted 10 Years Ago


It does seem a bit simple but the thought is very nice. Don't we all want someone out there to forgive us for something bad we did.

Keep it up

N.S.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is a very innocent poem, and heartfelt... simple and nice to read...

Posted 10 Years Ago


This poem expresses your identity a lot. Your someone who easily can be forgiven. Maybe people just don't like to show that they forgive you but deep inside they do.

Posted 10 Years Ago


It seems too.. simple.
Put more emotion into it.
Tell what happened in concise terms.
Drag the reader in

Posted 10 Years Ago


A very poetic apology and a nicely done write!

Posted 10 Years Ago



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HorrorMaster
HorrorMaster

Tamarac, FL



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Hello i'm Ira and i'm pretty much a horror writer. I have bad grammar and spelling or typos errors, but I tried my best, so please enjoy them. Also I don't like harsh grammar nazi saying (oh yo.. more..

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