I'm Sorry

A poem about a friend made another friend sad and asking her forgiveness.

I’m sorry I made you sad

I didn’t mean to make you mad at me

I hope you forgive me, so we can be friends

It will make me glad to see you smile.

I wish I can take back from what I said.

I would give you gifts.

If you could give me one more chance,

I will make you happy even more.

Please forgive me!

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Frifthor (D^2)]

I have to say you've done well in expanding yourself out of the horror genre, leading into an awful lot of good poetry. I like that you've kept up incorporating songs into your stories and poem (especially since it's a nice remix), as it adds it's own atmosphere to the writing. Good work once again, I look forward to seeing what comes up next.

[George Love]

Once again, a very good work. Definitely growing as a poet.

[ur_ginger_girl]

thats sweet its not ur usuall stuff but its good

[Loner]

Sooooooooooo sweet!!!!!
u sure have a lighter side to yr poems Ira loved it.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Awe soo cute. I love this poem. I like the step you took our of horror. It is a good step, but you are an awesome writer when it comes to horror. This was adorable though. I hope she forgave you.

[An owl on the moon]

This was struck me deeply, as I am prone to say things I later regret. Words can't be taken back, but forgiveness can be given. Thank you so much for sharing this amazing message..

[NeverSurrender]

It does seem a bit simple but the thought is very nice. Don't we all want someone out there to forgive us for something bad we did.

Keep it up

N.S.

[Shalini Dinesh (Poet's ..]

This is a very innocent poem, and heartfelt... simple and nice to read...

[R E Tree]

This poem expresses your identity a lot. Your someone who easily can be forgiven. Maybe people just don't like to show that they forgive you but deep inside they do.

[Vanna Renee]

It seems too.. simple.
Put more emotion into it.
Tell what happened in concise terms.
Drag the reader in

[Ice QueenJen]

A very poetic apology and a nicely done write!