Come back

Come back

A Poem by HorrorMaster
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A poem about having your only best friend coming back to chill with you.

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Please come back, so we can chill.

Since you been gone it made me ill.

You are my true friend.

Please come back!

I’m sorry that you feel sad.

If you chill with me, I will make you feel glad.

I know how you feel on being heart broken.

You just got to move on.

We all miss you dude.

Your true friends and your mom miss you.

I’m not gay, but I have to say I miss you man.

Please come back, so we can hang again.

© 2010 HorrorMaster


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Great write. Nice Change.

Always,

Jaidyn

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Has a childlike charm and innocence about it..great

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is a wonderful poem about wanting your best friend come and just hang out with you! I love how you say how you know how he is feeling, I to miss my best friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is a change from the usual killing and slaying(:
Always a bonus.
Everyone knows what it's like to be in this position.
I've moved several times.
And I've met several friends that have moved.
So I understand the truth of the story.

But on the critiquing side, I'll have to say, use more emotion from the heart.
Right it as you truly feel it in feelings, not in words.

Agnes Cross

Posted 10 Years Ago


I hope so :(

Posted 10 Years Ago


Awww... Thanks Ira... Don't worry.. I'm going to be back soon.

Posted 10 Years Ago



This was very emotional...but...the line.."I’m not gay, but I have to say I miss you man." kinda ruined it and made it a bit funny...
as for others, this was very good.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Hey bro, this is heartfelt. That's what matters. Nice write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Are you talking about Blake??
I would see why you miss him...I feel bad for him...and this was a good poem. I hope he feels better soon... :(
I'm worried.....
Well thanks for sharing.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on October 10, 2010
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HorrorMaster
HorrorMaster

Tamarac, FL



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Hello i'm Ira and i'm pretty much a horror writer. I have bad grammar and spelling or typos errors, but I tried my best, so please enjoy them. Also I don't like harsh grammar nazi saying (oh yo.. more..

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