The eyes.

Reading

the eyes 

having found words

hover like bumble bees

feed

then fly away.

Reviews

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This little excellent poem is awesome! The imagery is spectacular!

[Relic]

Thanks so much, Imagination101. I'm glad you liked it. :)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

My pleasure!

[KAREN]

This simple poem has a story, and I like that. The imagery is perfect!

[Relic]

I appreciate your thoughts, STT. Thank you. :)

[KAREN]

You're very welcome!

[Betty Hermelee]

lovey imagery and a true comment on what the eyes see, versus what the words say and the bumble bees
hover, like words, then fly away but the eyes still tell all.
Best, B

[Relic]

Thank you, Betty. :)

[Betty Hermelee]

You’re very welcome!

[Stella Armour]

Haha , love this Tim.
It's very visual and i can see the reader having had his fill getting up from the chair feeling very satisfied :)

[Relic]

Thank you, Stella.

[Einstein Noodle]

i think this is fantastic Relic! so simple and true .. the bumble bees hovering is a delight .. oh how the poets and writers do read .. a whole lot if one is serious about their own "product" .. how else do we learn .. how else do we mold our own unique Voice .. beautiful little poem my friend!
E.

[Relic]

Thanksso much, Einstein.

[barleygirl]

Sometimes what the eyes have to say can be trusted far more than what the mouth does! (((HUGS)))

[Relic]

Thanks, Margie.

[Sean M. Addams]

Powerful and deep overall great job on this. I like the imagery in this as well

[Relic]

Thanks very much, Sean.

[Fran Marie]

poets have hungry eyes
for beautiful poetry
we feed upon each
word and verse no
mater how short
or long..its manna for the soul

Nice Work Tim

[Miss Sharon]

Short but powerful writing my friend! Well done. ~Sharon

[Relic]

Thank you, Sharon.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I love this one...short and powerful.
maybe better if they don't find words, then they may hover longer...and get too attached to fly.
j.

[Relic]

That's a good thought. Thanks, J.