The eyes.

The eyes.

A Poem by Relic
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Reading

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the eyes 
having found words
hover like bumble bees
feed
then fly away.

© 2023 Relic


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This little excellent poem is awesome! The imagery is spectacular!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Relic

2 Years Ago

Thanks so much, Imagination101. I'm glad you liked it. :)
KATHY SUE SILLS

2 Years Ago

My pleasure!
This simple poem has a story, and I like that. The imagery is perfect!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Relic

2 Years Ago

I appreciate your thoughts, STT. Thank you. :)
KAREN

2 Years Ago

You're very welcome!
lovey imagery and a true comment on what the eyes see, versus what the words say and the bumble bees
hover, like words, then fly away but the eyes still tell all.
Best, B

Posted 2 Years Ago


Relic

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Betty. :)
Betty Hermelee

2 Years Ago

You’re very welcome!
Haha , love this Tim.
It's very visual and i can see the reader having had his fill getting up from the chair feeling very satisfied :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Relic

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Stella.
i think this is fantastic Relic! so simple and true .. the bumble bees hovering is a delight .. oh how the poets and writers do read .. a whole lot if one is serious about their own "product" .. how else do we learn .. how else do we mold our own unique Voice .. beautiful little poem my friend!
E.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Relic

2 Years Ago

Thanksso much, Einstein.
Sometimes what the eyes have to say can be trusted far more than what the mouth does! (((HUGS)))

Posted 2 Years Ago


Relic

2 Years Ago

Thanks, Margie.
Powerful and deep overall great job on this. I like the imagery in this as well

Posted 2 Years Ago


Relic

2 Years Ago

Thanks very much, Sean.
poets have hungry eyes
for beautiful poetry
we feed upon each
word and verse no
mater how short
or long..its manna for the soul

Nice Work Tim



Posted 2 Years Ago


Short but powerful writing my friend! Well done. ~Sharon

Posted 2 Years Ago


Relic

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Sharon.
I love this one...short and powerful.
maybe better if they don't find words, then they may hover longer...and get too attached to fly.
j.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Relic

2 Years Ago

That's a good thought. Thanks, J.

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Added on October 19, 2021
Last Updated on March 7, 2023
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