Shelter

Loss hurts but their love for you will always carry on

I find shelter in this way
Dark undercover, hideaway
I have never felt this way
So much depth in the pain I've gained

Can anyone make it better when the lights go down?
Shelter me
Shelter me
The darkness evolves
Though your love carries on

Reviews

[coffeedigest]

Very well done. Your words were clearly heartfelt and charged with emotion. My only criticism would be possibly finding an alternative to the second "Way" in the first stanza. It just seemed a little predictable. Yet overall I found it to be beautiful and powerful! Well done.

Josh

[Heart of gold]

Thank you josh I always strive to grow my skills much appreciated
Hannah

[alifeacoustic]

Their love will always be there for you, never diminishing. Wonderful tear stained words. Beautifully written.

[Heart of gold]

Thank you very much once again :)

[alifeacoustic]

You're welcome :-)