Purple & Pink

Purple & Pink

A Poem by Tobi

There's nothing wrong with a little colour


Fallen hues,
On a planet of fade.
The constant slip,
Of the dull cascade.

So much more could be sensed.
A wasted ability,
Limiting our choice,
Of what we could always see.

When the greyness encloses,
You can still think,
To craft an internal world,
Made of purple and pink.         

© 2009 Tobi

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Haha- my two least favorite colours ^_^
Seriousely though, this poem speaks true. I can see where you are comming from and I agree.
Great poem- and a little colour is great!

Posted 13 Years Ago

This is a great poem. It uses many fancy words! i like fancy words =) good job.

Posted 13 Years Ago

This is really pretty! It flows nicely, and the topic is not cliche. I love how it creates a world in only 12 short lines. Very nice job. =]

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on November 3, 2009
Last Updated on November 3, 2009



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