S(he) Be(lie)ve(d)

(W)ords,

He would soon regret

Came out so easily only with a whisp

You listened closely as they left his lips

Music to your ears

All the things you wanted to hear.

 

(W)atching,

From a distance

Until they saw you fall

Give it up with no resistance

The argument; it’s better to give up give in

Then hold tight to shattered memories.

 

(W)aiting,

For the day when you smile

Knowing everything will be ohkay

Forgiveness and hopefulness

Are in your heart

Healing wounds that have left deep scars.

 

(W)eakening,

From the days that grow longer

Maybe he thought this would make you stronger

With each breath you take your heart beat slows

It’s time to let go.

 

(W)hite-Flag,

That you held high

On this day that ended the pain

Such a shame that you’re to blame

Murdered by your own creation

An awful way to die I'd say

They saw you and were not suprised

Still horror reflected in their eyes.

 

(W)rong,

Is what he said they were

But look at you now

She took a glance

A slight grin passed her lips

Close your eyes you know what’s next

"I told you what would happen"; this.

Reviews

[MOON]

Very original the way you told the tale. Very good.

[Comlette]

This is Fantastic! This poem is very unique, in a way it connects to me personally somehow. The flow and creativity with it are astounding! Bravo, very well done :)

[J.M]

Heart-breakingly lovely. Extraordinarily vivid the images seem to flow from the words like water from a stream.

I agree, AMAZING.
you have alot of talent, and I think there is even some that you have yet
to express.
this peice shows as a gateway so to speak
a gateway to all the amazing things your mind has to offfer.
once again this piece is splendid.
keep it up.

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. Each set of lines making the poem stronger. Most of us see the dead end and pretend it isn't there. Complete poem is outstanding. Thank you.
Coyote

[Sharkapillar]

A.
Ma.
Zing.

[Phillips]

((jaw drops)) simply amazing. i LOVE the title. its flows nicely, and its something most of us can relate to. keep it up.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a good poem. I liked it a lot. I could feel the emotions within it. Thanks for sharing. :)