Crumbles

Created within the earth.. 
Crumbles of stone swift touches against the sand
The wind blow against the cheek. 
Entangle within the webs of faith. Seeking into the unknown i found you.
Sinking into the flesh cloaking the eyes into darkness. Your lips pure as gold. Yet so cold. 

The shiver against the spine. cling against the heart. 
Twisted into the thread bonded by lies. 
The beauty of a mask shaking with greed. 
Is this what you really are … a creature of my nightmares.

To be found within the darkness corner of my mind.
Hide within such beauty. 
To be lend to my death. 
Being twisted and mold from your touch. 

I have found you within the cold parts of my heart. 
Your a divine beyond all beings. 
I give up my life for you, but watches as it turns into stone.
Born out of the earth… will I be once more.. 

The laughter of your voice shattering the mind into insanity 
I watch as I slowly lose who i once was into the darkness of greed.
Being deceived by you was just a chess game to you. 
Ripping apart my humanity. Leaving nothing,but my soul. 

watch me crumble. watch me rise back from the earth. 
watch me create what once was. For my love for you will shatter.
watch as this world swallow you and destroy you.
for your beauty will fade against the wind. 

I will become strong. 
Won’t be fool by your lies and games. 
I was created from this earth… once more It where i will be. 

Reviews

[Odysseus Wanders]

Nice writing... I enjoyed reading.
Maybe tighten up the style and grammatical issues...
Little stuff... spaces between coma's and word's....
What's capitalized. What's not.
Make choices. Commit. Ask for more.
Make the power of your writing equal the power of your voice.
Its there!