Tree Hugs...

This poem is basically like a childs poem although it can be read by adults I love making children poems and this one was inspired to me by "The Giving Tree"

I stare out my window

Blue as can be

And right there I see

Two eyes staring at me.

 

But just not any eyes

Big bright blue ones,

And just looking at the body

It must weigh tons!

 

Its skin so rough

as brown as could be,

Then I find out

It walks way different then me!

 

Now he is signaling me

To just go outside,

But I just get scared

And shriek "OH MY!"

 

Then he seems harmless

Giving me the puppy eyes

But I hate the eyes,

Thats what I despise.

 

 

Next, I feel bad

Of what I have done to him,

I have been so mean

I guess I have been dim.

 

I walk slowly outside

Approaching the tree

Next thing I find

I'm in his arms, he's hugging me.

 

As I hugged him back

I still layed in fear

Just because this giant

Was so very near.

 

But after all

He didn't hurt me

Because all he wanted

Was me for his friends, to be.

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Please ignore any of my bad grammar, spelling, or vocabulary

Reviews

[closed]

wow! I really loved this it was very cute! good job!

[Marina]

Awh.
I love this so much.
Brings me back to the good ole' days.

[fgsgdsf]

This was so cute!
I was very happy while reading this. It brought out my inner child, as I am sure it has for most people who have read it.
Great Job!

[THERISA]

Lots of adults could learn from your poem, not to judge other people by their looks. Rather by their actions towards them. Hopefully, your poem is the first step in educating society in changing in this positive way. Thank you for sharing this positive poem with us.

Therisa

[Shadows of Sight]

this was adorable!
I love the ending with the giant tree giving the child a hug!
What a great story!
:)