Storm

And Through The Pouring Rain...

A still, silent storm brings my life awake,

And little by little, rain drops threaten my soul to take.

They begin to drop rapidly, bearing into my skin,

And in my mind, I know something terrible is about to begin.

They gently caress my hair, whispering in my ear,

Words of sorrow, Words of horror saying, "The end is near."

The more I struggle, The more I die, and then the more they speak.

They take my soul, my heart, my mind - Leaving me very weak.

I cry out in anguish, my body to the ground.

The rain gently soaks me in, drowning me with no sound.

I know this is the end, how could I be wrong?

They left me suffering, suffering for so long.

As tears form in my eyes, I give up my last of hope.

And Through The Pouring Rain...

I let go of my ghost

Author's Note

This is open to illustrations, but mainly it's about dying on the inside. The pain that slowly eats away your soul, and those voices inside of your head telling you that you can't do it, you won't succeed. Anyway, I hope you enjoy! :D

Reviews

[Criss ;)]

what the storm you are onself...lol :)
you here i think almost all thing penned about storm that's really in really happens, you saw me a full movie by this, i think you could be a great film maker, i 'd love to play a role of Hero in your film with you if you give chance in your film if you'll make...lol ;)
but before that i wanna read you more and more because i loved your all writings and if i'd a suggestion to you to give then i wanna say, try to write some screen plays too, you can write, i've seen this, you're a great writer and you should have to reach outside....

[zainul]

The poem is a wonderful piece.
Dragged me down to the end like the Pied Piper of Hamlin.

Gorgeous write.

[IcYLuVa]

Thanks!! I really appreciate your review (:

[Persephone]

Hauntingly good - Its as if your the ghost telling your story - awesome poem..simply stunning...

[IcYLuVa]

Thank you!!!, and Thanks for taking your time to comment on my poem (: I appreciate it!

[Mr Alednac]

This is a very chilling poem and the image at the end adds and extra effect that works!!! Really good stuff!

[IcYLuVa]

Thank you Soooo much!!! (: I appreciate your comment (:

[Mr Alednac]

You're very much welcome! :) Keep 'em coming!