Frosted

A Poem by ICE

Jumbled mess of words that have a deep meaning...somewhere

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Broken

We Are

Shattered

With delusions

Open

We Close

And Close We cry

Hardened by love

And love we die

Solid

I feign

While Apart We fall

© 2009 ICE

Reviews

Capriciousoul

Wow! Really nice poem!
"Shattered with delusions"
I really like that part because it's true
"Hardened by love and love we die"
This is very nice also.
I think the ending is really good. But if you think it could be stronger, review it again and add more!

Posted 15 Years Ago

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Added on April 22, 2009

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I'm a brooding poet who has been writing since middle school. My writing has a tendency of being rather dark...and I like it that way. I am female who is 20 years old and I'm currently in colle.. more..