Defeat

Defeat

A Poem by ICE

Rain falls

For no man

So surely

It does not fall for me.

Tired I tried...

You tired of me.

The blood flows

Like the drops of rain

And puddles at my feet.

© 2009 ICE


Author's Note

ICE
Love the rain!

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short but powerful. For me it conjured up sweet images but then a brutal flash of reality. very nice :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Powerful write..you say alot with such short words, but the meaning of this entire poem is direct. I love the rain but i hate thunder..lol i am terrified of it..but i love lightining..lol i know what your probably thinking, why would like the one that can actually kill you..its an ongoing question that I ask myself..but that is all irrelevant, i loved this poem...

Well From One Word-Play Poet To The Next...Always Remember To Write With Your Heart!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love this poem! You say you hate rigid meter, I say you do a damn fine job without it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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A little sweetness and a little vicera... a delightful combination. Great work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Love the rain too...and the poem just sets the right mood of utter defeat!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on April 24, 2009

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I'm a brooding poet who has been writing since middle school. My writing has a tendency of being rather dark...and I like it that way. I am female who is 20 years old and I'm currently in colle.. more..

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