Red Mirror

Red Mirror

A Poem by ICE
"

Just me rambling on...

"

Carry away this...

 

I'm Dead inside.

Fill my head with

Needless lies.

 

Take this...

 

You take that

Mirror Down,

Look me in

Eyes spent and

Rip this

Heart out.

 

Kill this

Urge to

Crash.

 

Rocking to and

Fro

Like leaves

On trees.

Red December and

Thieving thieves.

 

Resolution's no solution

Just an easy afterthought

After the sun's gone down.

© 2009 ICE


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I think your flow in this poem makes it easy to read and relate to. I love the word use as well..its simple but says so much with just a few words..I like how u use mirror in the middle part of the poem and then red towards the end..your title is what captured me and I think you tied it in well..I really enjoyed the whole thing. great write...

I love this stanza:
"Take this...
You take that
Mirror Down,
Look me in
Eyes spent and
Rip this
Heart out."

Well From One Word-Play Poet To The Next...Always Remember To Write With Your Heart!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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wonderful flow i love it! i can really relate

Posted 11 Years Ago


I love the creative simplistic approach. A ramble that came cross awesome. If I could flow like this my soon to be released poetry book would be extra special. I just don't have it like that. I enjoyed. I hope you keep rambling and sending me read request of your rambles.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Well, you ramble quite well......it comes out beautifully!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I think your flow in this poem makes it easy to read and relate to. I love the word use as well..its simple but says so much with just a few words..I like how u use mirror in the middle part of the poem and then red towards the end..your title is what captured me and I think you tied it in well..I really enjoyed the whole thing. great write...

I love this stanza:
"Take this...
You take that
Mirror Down,
Look me in
Eyes spent and
Rip this
Heart out."

Well From One Word-Play Poet To The Next...Always Remember To Write With Your Heart!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Thieving Thieves"... very Claudio of you, hehe. I like this.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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