Blue Cloud

Blue Cloud

A Poem by ICE

The blue cloud sunrise

Pushes and pulls

With the lamentations

Of the tides.


The blue cloud sunrise

Soft and delicate

Quiet spoken

Lifts the swollen

Sun to its feet

Lets it move to the beat

After a long slumber at sea.

© 2010 ICE

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Short but very well written. Beautiful.

Posted 11 Years Ago

I can picture sitting on a beach some where watching the sun slowly rise. Well done

Posted 11 Years Ago

I really love this one. Your choice of words created a very vivid picture for me of the ocean that is waking up with the dawn. This is really well done. I love it.

Posted 11 Years Ago

I like this one a lot. It seems like a metaphor for life. No matter how bad things are, the dawn always brings something good. I don't know if that was your intent, but that's how I interpreted it.

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on February 17, 2010
Last Updated on February 17, 2010




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