Killer thoughts

Now I lay me down to sleep, and all these spirits start to creep...

When I lay myself down

The invasion of my mind begins

The darkness outlines

Evil grins

These evil spirits constantly

Pushing me to double up on my sins

Demons in my mind

Engraving thoughts of death

I can smell the devils acidic breath

Lucifer's on top of me

Doing the dance of death

With my eyes closed

I can see the cloaked one

Grab my wrist

I open my eyes

And see a black mist

Twisted disgusting thoughts

Of violent murders

Spill into my hemispheres

Spirits hovering above me

With bright golden eyes

Whispering amongst themselves

About my demise

I try to move

But I'm paralyzed

I try to scream

But I am mute

These entities

Continue to pollute

my mind

With images of me

Slaughtering 

My family

I suddenly hear a voice say

"Death and suicide are on your side"

These killer thoughts

Start to subside

My eyes get heavy

I finally fall asleep

Now

The 

Nightmares

Start to creep..

Author's Note

From real experiences. It's been many years since I've had encounters like this...

Reviews

[Randall Stone]

Hi Creeper, thanks for the invite to join the group. Fantastic imagery conjoured here and reflects the kind of year I've had beautifully. I can't deny that a lot of these thoughts and feelings have been familiar to me. I love the way you leave it all open to the reader's interpretation. A true classic My Friend. God Bless.

[Rob Santana]

Thanks for the R&R, hey thank you for joining DARK REALM.....

[Randall Stone]

Pleasure's all mine My Friend. God Bless.

[Relic's Bare Trees]

Haunting with a heavy dose of dread that comes from the darkest of places. Scary stuff. Great writing.

Dark Realm Group.

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

Dark, disturbing, my style!!! I like how you left it more mysterious, like is the narrator really being haunted, or is he just completely crazy. Good, glad that you are my friend!!

[Rob Santana]

Hey thanks Greg, thanks for your friendship.

[Canicus]

this had me from the beginning, I couldn't stop reading it. the imagery in this is good. My favorite part was:

"I can feel the devils acidic breath
He's on top of me doing the dance of death
Although my eyes are closed yet not asleep"

good write keep it up.

[†Tracey†]

I love the raw depth to this.. and how with your great description made it play like a mini movie in my mind.. excellent darkness:) xo

[Jason]

Wow, nice poem. Really liked the imagery.


100/100

[RachelReaper]

I know exactly how you feel, but then again, you already knew that. I love your poem, its dark and I can relate to it.

[Rob Santana]

My new found friend,thanks Rachel :)

[Jack Reaper]

well that was.. enthralling. i actually had to read it a few times just to absorb all of it. fantastically dark, and probably one of my favorites. nicely done.

[Rob Santana]

Thanks Jack really appreciate your read and review.

[Pixals]

Love the imagery. Really like your writing. Always so dark. I like dark :P

[A Teenage Girl]

Damn, have you got into my diary once again?! Hahaha, but seriously, I love this. It's so twisted and messed up and just plainly awesome.

Dreadful c:
100/100

[Rob Santana]

LMAO!!! Thanks TG, twisted and messed up is what most people I know call me,haha. Oh well what ever.