DOOMED

A failure at all levels

 

But having a desire to achieve

 

Life is torturous,

 

Death is everlasting

Reviews

[natasha rawls aka "simo..]

Short, yet deep and accurate in places! Lol

[Rob Santana]

Ha, thanks Natasha. Wrote this one during one of my episodes of insomnia, hahaha. Thanks for the friend request.

[David Scott]

It does feel this way.
Yet feelings are often false...
We are immortal in spirit.
Life is indeed everlasting.
Death is a lie unless we choose it to be our eternity...
Interesting write Rob.
Sorry to counterpoint your creative poetry. This is my true heart and belief.
Be well friend.

[Rob Santana]

Well said David. Thank you for enlightening me with your words. Thank you very much.

[I Am Svetlana]

Short piece, but filled with deep meaning and a powerful message...why live life if we aren't happy or if we aren't treated the right way? You're words hold true...life is tortorous...but we all must make the best of it and find our own happiness.

[Rob Santana]

Strong words you've left Svetlana. Thank you for your review.

[ms. barrie]

Profoundly dark....I love your choice of words and
How you used them. I enjoyed the raw honesty you
Conveyed in this write...speaking volumes in which at
Times we all tend to feel this way. Amazing write Rob...
Thank you for sharing :))))))

[Rob Santana]

Thank you Barrie. I always appreciate your visit. :)

[ms. barrie]

You're very welcome, Rob...And likewise! I'll be sure to visit
More often when I can finally pen my new current writing project, :))))

[s y e]

Oooooooo, I like this one!!! It is short but oh so powerful and precise. You have the ability to write powerful poems and make such an impact with them. I truly loved this one.

[Rob Santana]

Gracias mi hermana. ABRAZOS ....

[BloodySkye]

I know the feeling a little too well. Sometimes it can be comforting to sit and stay inside the dark with candles lit reflecting our inner desire on the walls of our hearts. More failure should lead to a stronger ambition to rise up and defeat the darkness. But since we have life why not live it the fullest the best way we can. At least the desire to achieve is still present which is a whisper of hope.

[Rob Santana]

Touching review. Your words have truth and encouragement. Thank you very much B.

[BloodySkye]

Anytime :)