irony

Take what you can from these words of mine :)

Besieged by blue, did I not realise it was a dream? Periwinkles, ceruleans and navys of all sorts; vast stretches spread like the ocean, and me, in the middle of it all. Whether it was supposed to be the sea or the sky still remains a clue but I do recall cupping my hands in that azure, sinking down in it as if this were a perfectly normal thing to do and somehow weeping..? Sobbing or not I clearly remember the solitude and how.. at ease I felt. Knowing it was just myself alone with my thoughts made me content.

There it was again- that blue. Only this time it was a clear gradient of aquamarine and emerald and my head stuck out the car window, wind weaving through my hair- of course it had to be a dream, though who realizes it at the time? Cool and refreshing as I ran my fingers through it; the sand and roadside and familiar strangers sprinkled strategically. 

Oh, the reveries of the brain.

Author's Note

Any tips on improving this?

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the use of words. Many kinds of poetry. I liked the internal and private feel of this one. You wrote this one with a personal feel. You told a story and I wanted to know and read more. Poetry support to make the reader think and ponder. This poem did. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[imagine, inspire]

I am touched by your kind words. Thank you so much!

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[The Iron Horseman]

I really like this, mainly because of the vivid imagery, but I would be tempted to rework it in verse. That, however, is just a personal preference! :)
As someone whose mind goes off into all sorts of weird rambles, I empathise with your cocclusion. Nice work.
Oh, BTW, you misspelled 'besieged'. :)

[imagine, inspire]

Thanks for noticing the error :) All fixed now! Really appreciate your review.

[The Iron Horseman]

So I see. I made one myself in my comment. Did you catch 'cocclusion' when it should have been 'conclusion'? Damn fingers! lol

[imagine, inspire]

Haha yes don't worry about it, typos make us all more human :P

[Antonio Marco]

Very good use of analogies. no improvements needed. well worded poem

[imagine, inspire]

I feel honored that you think so :)